Ok I know I am novice but what is all this back to basics lark?
In my short experience I have found the Slimline to be the hardest of all kits I have done.
They are the most adaptable, the most challenging and the most bloody fiddly of all kits, I find nothing basic about them at all.
These are a fair attempt at a "basic" kit but I think you may have worn your bushes out as the centre band looks proud and the cap finial is to large.
Could be the angle of the picture or my eyes are failing, I have done a couple of pictures myself like that, the camera picks up what I am sure is not there.