The concept is good Dave. Keep at it and you'll get some excellent results !!!!
Steve, all criticisms aside that is one lovely looking pen. The clip end is somewhat too anorexic for my taste (heck, the standard slimline is too anorexic for my taste, undercutting it is just asking for trouble!) but I am deeply impressed by your original interpretations of the slimline. Keep it up!
PLONKER!!!!!!