segmented no.3 new photo

[alan morrison]

Thanks to Glen and Peter I have been able to upgrade my woeful picture to one not just as bad

 

[Les ELm]

Looks well done,
except the clip is hiding your workmanship.

Les

 

[fortress]

Excellent Alan, I know it sounds negative and I apologise but it’s a pity you’ve covered the inlays with the clip IMHO.

 

[flexi]

A better picture, you can now see more colour in that....well done

 

[alan morrison]

Looks well done,
except the clip is hiding your workmanship.

Les

Yes I agree. All critiques welcome
Alan

 

[alan morrison]

Excellent Alan, I know it sounds negative and I apologise but it’s a pity you’ve covered the inlays with the clip IMHO.

Not negative at all John. I want feedback and don't mind " negative" because I need to learn. So I appreciate your comments
Alan

 

[alan morrison]

Excellent Alan, I know it sounds negative and I apologise but it’s a pity you’ve covered the inlays with the clip IMHO.

Hope that is better

 

[fortress]

D-elightful Alan, expertly done.

 

[Penpal]

Remember if you cover with the clip the pen has 360 degrees you can photograph.

Ahhhh thats better mate.

Peter.